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Tuesday, 20 September 2016

Erica's Narrative 20/9/2016

One pleasant day Mark and his dog Coco went for a walk at the sea. Mark want to rest because he was extremely exhausted from work. It was absolutely quiet. They can hear the wave and seagulls. Coco curled up into a ball and went to sleep. After a few minutes Coco woke up. Mark and Coco went home. It was chilly in their residence.
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  1. Anonymous22 September 2016 at 10:30

    I liked the way you described what the day felt like
    But you put to much full stops close together

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