English- Persuassive Writing

Team sports are better than individual sports.

I agree with this idea

Points:
1. Can strengthen teamwork
2. Can create new friends through similar interest
3. Helps physical health

I agree with this point, although team and individual sports each have their own benefits I still think that team sports are better than individual sports. Firstly, it can strengthen a person's teamwork by playing alongside them even if the person knows them or not. Working as a team requires a huge amount of cooperation skills so while playing the person learns how to work with a team. Teamwork and cooperation are important. Teamwork is essential and can help you in many ways whether it be work, school or with family.

In addition to that, Team sports are great for making new friends. Lots of people have made friends while playing sports the reason for that is because of their similar interest in the activity. Even after playing each other on a certain game they still managed to become friendly with each other.

Furthermore, Sports can help you with your physical health, sports activities can be beneficial to your body. These activities require you to move so although it might just be a hobby for some people it helps them in some ways. It keeps you in shape and strengthens your muscles and your bones. Stamina can also increase. Unlike other hobbies and activities that only require sitting down, sports are fun and are useful to you. It doesn't have to be every day that people play sports it can just be when you have free time.

I am aiming to improve my writing in the following 3 areas: Vocabulary, Spelling and Punctuation

I will do this by: (explain at least 3 things you will change in this piece of writing in order to improve in these categories) Changing a few of the easier words to a more difficult one, making sure my spelling is correct,

Engilish Persuassive Writing

The South Island is better than the North Island.

I agree with this point

List of points:
Lot of places to go to
Cheaper
Lots of job offer

New Zealand has two main islands that are very well known, those two islands are the South Island and the North Island. Lots of people think that North Island is better than South Island. However, I believe the opposite, I believe that South Island is much greater than North Island for these reasons The South Island has plenty of places to go to, it is a lot cheaper, and there's lots of job opportunities and offers.

It is clear that the South Island is bigger than the North Island, therefore, there are a huge amount of places you can visit. Due to the famous places around South Island tourist visit places that are popular.